Comments by All Members
- "the simplicity of the last line/strophe...surmising that understanding, illumination, and hindsight......are all indelible; inked on our beings...in our daily unawareness even.....always a pleasure~"
Posted by Unknown on "love letters" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "This is amazing. Naked expression that just longs to be delivered out of words into infinity. I wonder what is the inspiration behind the title. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by tindomerel on "Pravda" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I must say the title captured me immediately for it is a word I used to come across almost daily back in the day, when red was a colour of power. I do like this minimalist structure and your metaphor here is excellent. I am surprised there aren't any comments here. This deserves much appreciation. Thank you!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Pravda" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I like how the words seem to mimic the tape... I wonder about the warm discoveries... makes me want to experience one :) well done. thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Agent Provocateur" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "...the things by which we hang ourselves, or hang proverbially onto, even under the direst of perhaps false pretenses....or true hopes either.....this is an intense and interior write....you nailed the words and well as the giver. "
Posted by Unknown on "A Sacred Charm" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I liked this. It sounds really conversational, but every word weighs heavy and grave on the ear. There is not a line here that does not leave a trace in my mind."
Posted by Unknown on "A Sacred Charm" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "kings are made in such ways.................a pleasure to read this; a pleasure to know that in a fleeting moment of clarity and humanity, grace can resound from within...and extend outwardly, like time and its unsounding waves"
Posted by Unknown on "A Small Act of Defiance" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "funny, the beauty those little snippets of archaic literature can bring; funny, the little memories and the little mantras we bring to it.....while we are sleeping, we are awake elsewhere.....yes?"
Posted by Unknown on "Awake (Biblically)" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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