Comments by All Members
- "a very deep meaning underlies this poem.. "clouds do gather, be they blackened or not" is a line that says volumes. the scheme helps the mood also, very well done monkey, -Art"
Posted by Skye on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "...and there goes Urban, trying to make the comments once again longer than the poem itself...you always have a way of making people do that, you know...?"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "...this makes me feel all warm and cozy inside...I can't be evil when I'm feeling warm and cozy...stop it now!...no, really, good job...I think Hate said it best... -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I wish I could comment like Urban :'( All I can say is that I like this. You say a lot with few words:) *Lilith*"
Posted by Unknown on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "As for the message my mind received from this- I'm seeing that in order to gain insight and knowledge you have to live, bleed, love, cry, hate, smile. Very nicely done Peter. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I like the flow of this one. Seems like it started off calmly and then in the second stanza picked up pace until the last line and ended abruptly."
Posted by Unknown on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "well i think ur poems charactrized by deep philosphy , and thats what gives to the poem a deep meaning well done..."
Posted by Unknown on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
- "the beginning to this poem is awsome dm. the whole poem is great indeed. another good write. -Art"
Posted by Skye on "Heredity" by Dancing_Monkey
