Comments by All Members
- "you really do the rhyming style very well, you give it a relevant contemporary spin which is enjoyable and refreshing; and in my opinion that's no mean feat...I liked the cyborgy feel of this, given the age of Techno; of the net and cyberspace etc, this poem really fits in with current and social commentry as well as having a Fantasy/Fictional, almost "I, Robot" like theme....thought from strat to finish this was just a real treat for the eyes and ears. Great work....brilliantly rhymed and put together! "
Posted by stryder on "The Ilumination" by Malcholm Dark
- "I have never heard the 'nun joke' or seen a nun joke incorporated into a paradoxically teasing poem but this was definitely refreshing and fu to read; the whimsy, the intropsective quality, the poetically binding segments of ryme towards the finale......and the rain at the end, which was just fabulous a sounding line. You have a unique, yet somehow familiar style which is good to read.....so many soundbytes to this......your thoughts tsarted to helix.....I'd suggest you were in danger of becomign too didactic or clever for your own good, but I reckon...you just...just...about pulled it off. *Decides against becoming a monk....or nun in drag*"
Posted by stryder on "Life In Paradox City" by Malcholm Dark
- "Mind breaking and brilliant all the same, spinning around in circles never felt so good. The nun bit was classic, and overall a well written piece. Paradoxical logic just makes me all ones and zeroes. Write onward my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Life In Paradox City" by Malcholm Dark
- "indifference in the differences........... heart shattering this is, for have we all not have such memories we of misery....and if such is the present, may it be most short.........with a hopeful future, smiling upon. And as broken as this was, I still felt the waves of a delicate beauty......always leave a hopeful door cracked open!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Insufferable Differences" by Malcholm Dark
- "ooooooh! this should be titled 'marriage', no? hehe.. yeah, funny how nothing mattering makes the eyes water.... hilarious how this mimics so many broken couples. well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Insufferable Differences" by Malcholm Dark
- ""I hate the hater, I'll rape the raper" hmmm manson came to mind in more ways than one here.. nice lil acrostic, yep... ha, thanks man.... guess I don't wanna be a hater, but um.... does that mean I can't hate the hater?"
Posted by Unknown on "The Hater" by Malcholm Dark
- "An acrostic tribute to the hate beast, nicely done. Always feeding and always hungry for more. Another fine piece, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Hater" by Malcholm Dark
- "Ahhh it's an acronym...love these...holy shit Malcholm that sums up a lot of asswipes I've known. Write on, brother! Hate the haters......"
Posted by Unknown on "The Hater" by Malcholm Dark
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