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"BRAVO!!!!!!Awesome, simply awesome. Time and time again you amaze me with your scope and talent. I also think that you speak for many on this one,and you have done us a great service by putting pen to paper(so to speak) Excellent!"
Posted by angelunderneath on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"You are deemed the QUEEN of sexuality...velvet, no one take that from you...loved it, as usual."
Posted by Chameleon on "Said the Spider to the Fly...." by A Velvet Tongue

"as with all of our celebrations...clothing is optional but better left at home..:)"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Spring Equinox" by A Velvet Tongue

"Brillent..."
Posted by happymurderer on "Spring Equinox" by A Velvet Tongue

"do you get to dance naked under the moon, just joking this is truely beautiful and much more.............O."
Posted by Ophelia on "Spring Equinox" by A Velvet Tongue

"Amazing. Is it just me Vel or are you improving all the time. Now I believe you are, and that is just great! :) Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Said the Spider to the Fly...." by A Velvet Tongue

"*gasps* severly impressed by this work...its definatley attention getting. keep in mind i spent the first 13 years of life as a boy of the cloth...but i think you know i agree with you on your veiw of the "book of fiction" hehe -trowa"
Posted by trowasrevolution on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Ah my lovely, what a piercing and provoking piece you have penned with this little wonder. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Yummmmmmmmm..but you are so tasty!!! *winx*"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Said the Spider to the Fly...." by A Velvet Tongue

"how it was written but because it was there to be written. Great job. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Here I entomb the very embodiment of your Adam..formed from his rib The very one I cracked wide open while fucking him last night The face in my mirror, a likeness of your god" Great damn stanza. This one leaves me feeling dirty. Not because of "
Posted by Unknown on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"may those hypocritical sons-of-bitches find their place in hell is now occupied by a pillaging priest rapist who's only lot in life is to repay them (the priests) for all the grief they caused. over and over again. but I'm rambling now. good work! worm"
Posted by worm on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Stupid Priest! Child molesting faggots! Imbeciles!!! Morons! Blahhhh!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Damn impressive to say the least, you poured forth a wine kept bottled for too long...hypocrites...the bitter fuckin' truth...great write!+Fallen Angel+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Incredible write...enticing imagery... invading my thoughts with wicked seduction...(plead the fly to the spider,"Pleeese dooon't eat meee!"+Fallen Angel+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "Said the Spider to the Fly...." by A Velvet Tongue

"I guess I'm more used to your sexy pieces, this really surprised/impressed me. Very smart, very true, very well done."
Posted by Liz on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"well, gee, wouldn't you be surprised if I didn't like this one? heh...bitterness and judgement on those that think they should be the ones judging.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Thank you much...Somethings I've wanted to say for many a year..."
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"Everything I've wanted to say, and more, to too many people. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant"
Posted by Unknown on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"well Velvet, I'm thoroughly impressed. People who live by that "book of fiction" differ much from those who live on their own actions and ironically are much closer to sainthood than priests...so i think. this was a great poem! *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "The Bitter Truth (men of the cloth)" by A Velvet Tongue

"this is a damn good poem and the detail of it is just uttely amazing. vel you couldn't get greater if you wanted to...i mean that! a delightful use of words and a gift to bring them togther are 2 things you have! -trowa"
Posted by trowasrevolution on "Said the Spider to the Fly...." by A Velvet Tongue

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