Comments by All Members
- "Ummm... this is one of the best things you have written. You opened and let life and real emotion come out with intensity. This is a deep piece of art that you should be proud of. Thank you for sharing it, I feel blessed to be able to see a deeper part of you. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Awaken" by Dilated View
- "I can empathise with this...particularly like 'The clouds of doubt clash with wisdom and desire' Thanx"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Awaken" by Dilated View
- "heavy piece.... felt like an inner awareness... searching for something.. some form of truth to clear the burdens.."
Posted by Unknown on "Awaken" by Dilated View
- "I have read this more than a few times, and am humbled each and every one...You are a powerful writer, and very wise...it shines through in yours words."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "This meant a lot. A realization of where you have been, where you are, and where you could be. Loved it. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "wow... yeah.. I really like this... coming to the realisation of self-potential.. makes me think of the beauty that is in a man.. on the journey of becoming his own person, finding his own way.. a marvelous moment of exchange."
Posted by Unknown on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "This is a very inspiring piece, the setting a dreamscape... The name title is a perfect fit. I enjoy poems of conversation. A nice write."
Posted by Unknown on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "That was an awesome write, the ethereal voice was a great touch, the last line is one of hope for better things, if I say so myself, really nice poem, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "That was very cool, a fine poem... "I cannot recall having ever grown to be..." great line... thank-you for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "hmmm....not sure whether the end is prophetic or prescient or proper bologna. .. . .anything we dream? wouldnt tha' be subtle divine, to actually become that which we dream, but then. . . .what would we long for? why would we dream? would we lack the bitter to make the sweet itself seem sweet. .. . .. you confound and delight and delude my mind. .. . .it wanders freely on this path........i hope its one of quiet and solace......and of dream itself. happy st patricks dae."
Posted by Unknown on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "Fire came to my mind, staring into it on a black night while everyone else you know is loud and raucous and you're sipping your beer slowly and contemplating your place there...and everywhere. Short and meaningful. Good stuff."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "I immediately had visions of a misty forest setting.....excellent write with much wisdom"
Posted by Qurious on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "reminiscent of a parable.... perhaps an eastern exchange between a sage and a student, but the pronoun indicates the answer comes not from a human source... lucidity, the blending of waking life with the freedom of a dream..... if only reality were so easily affected. well done, man....I like the ambiguity of 'speechless'."
Posted by Unknown on "Clarity" by Dilated View
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