Comments by All Members
- "I pretty much want to say about this poem what I said about "The Heroin(e)". It's like a certain school of feeling that I've always loved, ever since I was a kid. It would come from a videogame, or being in the backyard, or in the airy, carpeted hall of a medical plaza, all intimate things that became nostalgic."
Posted by Octopus on "War in the Wandering of Worthless Matter" by LovelyUndead
- ""He shall forever live in a sea of fear"...Thats a great way to end a poem like this. Totally captures what the play is all about. Awesome:)"
Posted by Artanis on "Macbeth" by LovelyUndead
- "Yikes. felt like every word was a stab..so true, materialism and always attempting to be perfect superficially, trying to make a perfect mirage while everything else is ruined by it..."
Posted by Unknown on "God Bless (Shallow) America" by LovelyUndead
- "Lovely piece and much enjoyed the symbolism, this was very well done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Macbeth" by LovelyUndead
- "a scene reminiscent of American History X... I liked the line... the lie you softened against me.... there's a little bit of everything in here, from the bed, to china, to a curb killing.... very encompassing vision. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Smiley (Against the Curbs)" by LovelyUndead
- "You must have used quotation marks or something because your author's comments stopped mid-sentence. I liked this and believe the 14 trillion maybe our Gross National Product? Very political from an economic / consumer standpoint; but I could be wrong, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Smiley (Against the Curbs)" by LovelyUndead
