Comments by All Members
- "What a sweet, sweet poem. I loved the opening presentation also, ending with just the word (him), it really emphasised the importance. Nice write
:-)"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "kamikaze me" by disposable
- "Very touching and heart-breaking, but it has a tinge of hope, does it not? I adore the imagery and the feelings this stirs. Very nice write, and keep at it."
Posted by Rhys Ki on "our last breath" by disposable
- "I have to agree with Evolve. Don't get me wrong. Your use of adjectives in the beginning will leave people panting, but the end. The end is about so much more. I really enjoyed this one."
Posted by WickedAngel on "sense me" by disposable
- "although it is written very raw and definitely "bare", to me it was more about the little things getting lost amongst the bigger, more exciting actions. getting caught up in the moment i guess. it is correct for you to see the hidden vulnerability in this write because i have many issues. lol ty for being moved enough to leave your wisdom."
Posted by disposable on "sense me" by disposable
- "I didn't really see this as "hot". I saw it as a yearning exposal of self, like nudity of the soul. This felt bare. I saw myself in this, which at the same time is comforting and depressing. I hope you find someone who will appreciate you and all the little things involved in intimacy, true intimacy not just sex."
Posted by Unknown on "sense me" by disposable
- "that middle stanza is great...insane detail...good flow...loved the passion of the moment and your writing"
Posted by heroineyes on "sense me" by disposable
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