Comments by All Members
- ""then you know they're fucked" - I couldn't help but laugh at this line. This mournful scene definately has a touch of comedy to it."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Grey Skies" by Audrey_Star
- "This piece makes me wonder if promises still hold any value to the world. It seems a too perfect fantasy, which I admire. A dreamer's piece and nonetheless. Good work."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Nod" by Audrey_Star
- "hmmm... this is quite interesting, gets the gears and wheels and possums in the brain moving and shaking... has an eastern feel... i always find that i think more deeply about fewer words.."
Posted by Jonas on "Two Doors Down" by Audrey_Star
- "the format is great, fresh, to use a stoopid adjective... well written, thought provoking... made me smile that knowing smile... good stuff... you don't happen to be a new incarnation of audrey_screams do you?"
Posted by Jonas on "Dialogue" by Audrey_Star
- "Oh cool. I done went and inspired someone, lol. Glad I did, this was a wonderful piece to read. ~ wen"
Posted by manywalks on "Nod" by Audrey_Star
- "I should thank you (mw) for this it came to me after reading 'Manic Vibration'. so thank you."
Posted by Audrey_Star on "Nod" by Audrey_Star
- "Mmmm, if only promises such as that could be kept. What a whistfull and lovely piece. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Nod" by Audrey_Star
- ""who, through red water, never left" ooooh, v-e-r-y visual, I like the picture this splattered in m mind."
Posted by Unknown on "Empty" by Audrey_Star
- "It came across as almost comical... making it all the more better. Nice write/observation? "
Posted by Unknown on "Grey Skies" by Audrey_Star
- "Reminds me of driving and seeing a million different faces and wondering at their life stories...Wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "Plastic" by Audrey_Star