Comments by All Members
- "I edited it. I didn't even make the justin timberlake connection until you brought it up. I saw no choice in the matter."
Posted by Aleas on "Beauty of the World." by Aleas
- "I try to stay away fromlines that afterwards incurages a catchy tune like cry me a river. cous it kinda breaks the concentration to the poem. but i re read it and had a serius talk with myself. and it ended up nicely"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Beauty of the World." by Aleas
- "very interesting format...how it offests the reality and surreality of it all. .. the idea vs the ideal. .."
Posted by Unknown on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
- "Seems to me you've pretty much summed up the human condition, but with rare eloquence. I like the way you work words. "
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
- "Holy... (insert whatever word you want to follow that). You just put my current (situation/battles/hopes/fears) into words, and the last 3 lines (of both offsets) were like that punch in the gut that makes it impossible to breathe."
Posted by Sketso on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
- "Put it all on the line and regret nothing regardless of the outcome, without the leap, you've lost the faith, good luck :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Dare/Dream." by Aleas
