Comments by All Members
- "I'm thoroughly enjoying all of your entries to the site thus far. This is no exception. Your tone is very dark, in a more classic manner, while still remaining modern. Rhyme or formulated poetry doesn't usually prove itself intriguing enough to keep my interest, but this definitely did. There were a few lines that stood out to me, but the closing two lines definitely were the most outspoken of all those in the poem. Well done. "
Posted by Unknown on "Parking meters/Coin Dollars.(falling of the edge of the world)" by colorapathy
- "Intriguing wordplay throughout that leads to an overall (mind's) eye-catching and evocative piece...this is the kind of poetry that leaves you cradling your brain. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "you are [here]" by colorapathy
- "Something about this... perhaps it is the simplicity... or perhaps it is the meaning... something really makes this beautiful. And it flows so flawlessly."
Posted by wilted on "Ghost" by colorapathy
- "*translucent* and is 'dakeness' supposed to be *darkness* or *nakedness*? both have a good ring, though I must say, I like the second option better; not as clichéd and open to so many more interpretations...nice, all 4 posts so far. you've got a familiar something that's still a slightly different something all the same..."
Posted by Unknown on "Ghost" by colorapathy
- "I think we're all here. This is a collection of wonderful thoughts put together to fit perfectly. Really, every line could be something wonderful on its own. Different, definitely different. I like it."
Posted by wilted on "you are [here]" by colorapathy
- "Simple and intense. "oil drop memories" interesting idea there. Scratch that. This is filled to the brim with interesting ideas. The entire poem was so simple, yet so complex. Lovely."
Posted by wilted on "Stalling" by colorapathy
- "Lucid, effortless flow. Reminded, how it formed, of a raindrop. Interesting. Well done, indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "Stalling" by colorapathy
- "i love simple poems that that hold tons of meaning to them. you captred that here well. very nice write. welcome to dp. ~ta~"
Posted by denver nitze on "Stalling" by colorapathy
- "Wow, Im sitting here in the dark and I finished reading this and look up stairing back at my reflection in the mirror lighted by the dim laptops light and this poem clicked. I love it, I felt like the old lovers ghost, SHORT, SWEET, To The Point!! Once again Welcome to DP! ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "Ghost" by colorapathy
