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- "Thanks. :] I actually wrote this awhile ago, [ the 4th of July actually haha], and I'm honored to be on your favorite poets list. ;D"
Posted by PaYaSiN on "Flirting With Disaster" by PaYaSiN
- "I love how you never hold back; it's like a hurricane of rage (mixed with something else) and images. You structured this in a way that the sentences cascade into eachother, which works interestingly with the abrupt slapintheface ending. Powerful :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Flirting With Disaster" by PaYaSiN
- "I love comments like that. It really inspires me to write more things so people can enjoy it. Also my new work I try write more lyrically, so that could be the "rhythm." ;]"
Posted by PaYaSiN on "The Death of Marilyn Monfuckingroe" by PaYaSiN
- "haha. thanks. :] i never had religion in my life after i was 4 years old. so i can't relate to that. ;p again thanks for your imput. :]"
Posted by PaYaSiN on "Sikhism, But Not Really" by PaYaSiN
- "Your poems always make me feel...tension. I feel like I forget to breath. All in a good way though. Morbid imagry, vivid and profound. And your style is almost...cascading in rhythmn. Kinda like...idk how to describe it..."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Death of Marilyn Monfuckingroe" by PaYaSiN
- "This was a kick in the teeth..but in a most delightful way. "And molest myself til I wake up smiling" - very amusing, and served its point. The first two lines really sucked me in, the rest was brilliantly brutal. You know as a child, I always hated the way religion used to make me feel bad..especially during masturbation, it was quite a mood killer. ANYWAYS, awesome shit."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Sikhism, But Not Really" by PaYaSiN
- "*huggles* movin on is such a beautiful fuckin thing. ^_^ i likes this. lol your a nice person, i woulda stepped on the bitch as i walked over her"
Posted by Unknown on "I Laugh At My Own Memories" by PaYaSiN
- "Don't forget to apply a bit of thumb pressure to the soft spot between the smoo and back side....suspends the gasm for her, and squirts me in the face...it's a win/win.....ilovefingerfood."
Posted by Unknown on "Flag This Message" by PaYaSiN
- "lol. ;] yeah i kinda wish i woulda ended it at "But I face fuck you." seems it would have been better. as far as playing with hair... the shit is amazing. lol."
Posted by PaYaSiN on "Flag This Message" by PaYaSiN
- "the best part is "girls remember, when I eat you, that you have to play with my hair" cause I always play with a guys hair when he's....er..nevermind...good stuff"
Posted by Unknown on "Flag This Message" by PaYaSiN
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