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- ""Is this karma biting me on my ass? Or is it you, just being an ass?" Those lines do kind of not really fit in. I mean... the entire poem is written in a rather... "sad" way of a "broken heart" which feels rather low - and all of the sudden some... kind of power extract. Or was that on purpose?"
Posted by Any on "Dear Lost Love" by Angelic Demon
- "You are perfect. You know you can never be replaced, you are an amazing and beautiful woman and I love you to death. I hope things work out between you two because I know you he makes you happy, even though you argue. Don't let go of the ones who love you and who will always be there for you. I love you girly, and you mean the world to me."
Posted by Dysphoria on "Enjoy your perfect life..." by Angelic Demon
- "I get a pain when I am reminded of my past sorrows. But that is what poetry should do. It should move the reader, which this did. I'm glad you shared your thoughts, and I hope things get better for you."
Posted by MESUN on "Enjoy your perfect life..." by Angelic Demon
- "thank you so much for being there for me and listening to me talk last night, just know that even if the smile on my face isn't always real, you make me happy and I love you to death. This poem means a lot to me... Thank you"
Posted by Dysphoria on "Beautiful Girl" by Angelic Demon
- "oh... this made me cry.. in a good way.. I love you to, and you mean the world to me. I don't know what I would do with out you"
Posted by Dysphoria on "Beautiful Girl" by Angelic Demon
- "there should be more people like you and everyone deserves to feel beautiful. thank you for this, it was wonderfully written."
Posted by Nixx on "Beautiful Girl" by Angelic Demon
- "the shower can indeed be a salvation where you can scrub away all your regrets and your fears..you just have to be willing truly let them wash away"
Posted by Dysphoria on "The Shower" by Angelic Demon
- "You always seem to write something that I'm thinking about... Today was so depressing and I just wanted to shower... Loved it... *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Shower" by Angelic Demon
- "and I am by no means saying I don't take care of my kids, because I DO, but it'd be really fucking nice if someone would fucking pay me to stay home with them, where I WANT to be, instead of having to drudge through a workweek just to have food on the table and a roof over our heads..."
Posted by Unknown on "Our Children" by Angelic Demon
- "Maybe they're at work, trying to scrape by on the meager existence they can make for themselves in a world that didn't give them much of a chance to succeed to begin with...not all of us have what it takes to rise from poor boy to president; some of us have to work 40+ hours a week and let someone else take care of our children, since we didn't bother to go out and earn our millions before we had them..."
Posted by Unknown on "Our Children" by Angelic Demon
- "This is powerful. I like how it flashes forward. I love the ending, almost humorous. I really like the flow of your poetry."
Posted by Unknown on "Watchful Eyes" by Angelic Demon
- "I like this poem a lot. I can relate to your loneliness. I agree with fantacstasy, your style is awesome and reads well."
Posted by Unknown on "Oh My Lover" by Angelic Demon
- "Again, I think your style is awesome... but I wouldn't hold my breath waiting for love... it seems to crawl... very slowly..."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Oh My Lover" by Angelic Demon
- "...and sometimes the most innocent cannot speak in tragedy (cats are also awesome). Yet again well done :) look forward to reading more *tips hat* "
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Watchful Eyes" by Angelic Demon
- "I know love..I sit on the bus with you and we see this little kids riding alone, and I do wonder why their parents let them do it, but our world is far from perfect and their parents are probably off getting high (at least the ones in my neighborhood) Its sad but theres no way to make parents care or make kids be kids if they're trying to be adults."
Posted by Dysphoria on "Our Children" by Angelic Demon
- "parents just don't care any more...and aren't even there for their children. its so true...and sad cuz this is still a dangerous world for the weak. nice write"
Posted by RubyXero on "Our Children" by Angelic Demon
- "This made me want to cry when it says "Where are youre parents and why are you alone" because this is the life I have lived since I was 6 or 7....I really like this poem, and can relate in so many ways. Good job...."
Posted by brie_leigh on "Our Children" by Angelic Demon
- "Its not worth it but most people don't seem to give a damn about our planet. People will always value themselves over most everything, and as long as they have their SUV's and their cellphones they wont give a fuck about our planet.. Its sad that our planet is dying and no one seems to care. Maybe we'll all get wiped out by a asteroid or something. :]"
Posted by Dysphoria on "The Price We Pay" by Angelic Demon
- "That asshole pig will get whats coming to him my love..I still love this, life gets better eventually.. At least thats what I keep telling myself. I love you!"
Posted by Dysphoria on "Officer Todd" by Angelic Demon
- "I enjoyed it... loved the last two lines... they seem so deliciously spiteful, sarcastic maybe... God it get's me on... Anyways, nice work! *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Officer Todd" by Angelic Demon
- "it's not bad, but parts feel a little forced. "...make you subside" Also, avoid cliches like the plague-- "Dazed and confused" is probably not a good choice."
Posted by Unknown on "Officer Todd" by Angelic Demon
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