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Officer Todd
By Angelic Demon
I hoped you enjoyed ruining my life,
I hope you had fun dampening my light.
Leaving me here, dazed and confused,
Believing no one is right but you.
Not understanding, or choosing not to,
You have destroyed my life without a care or a thought.
Like you have never hit the bottle or smoked some pot.
I hope you had fun raining on my dreams, I hope you enjoyed ruining a team.
But this I know for sure, karma is on my side.
It will bring to your knees and make you subside.
The pain you have caused me will pierce through your heart.
Maybe not now but soon it will start.
You think all are stupid as you pick them apart,
But this game will end soon you will eventually see,
I hope you have fun enjoying your misery.
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© 2008 Angelic Demon
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On Sunday, January 13, 2008, Dysphoria
(88)
wrote:
That asshole pig will get whats coming to him my love..I still love this, life gets better eventually.. At least thats what I keep telling myself. I love you!
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On Saturday, January 12, 2008, Fantecstasy
(122) wrote:
I enjoyed it... loved the last two lines... they seem so deliciously spiteful, sarcastic maybe... God it get's me on... Anyways, nice work! *tips hat*
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A former member wrote:
it's not bad, but parts feel a little forced. "...make you subside" Also, avoid cliches like the plague-- "Dazed and confused" is probably not a good choice.
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On Saturday, January 12, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Damn, awesome write, nice rhyme scheme too...*Welcome to DP...-Gin
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