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- "well i must say that i found myself drooling during that. could be the tic tacs but...you really took me into that. and i had nin playing in the background...it was quite perfect. i loved everything about this piece. and i wish that you'd write more often to feed my spirit...well and because they are so refreshingly lovely"
Posted by RubyXero on "My letter to anyone and noone who reads it" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- ""And in a vain attempt to reincarnate
I gathered the shards
And glued them back together
With sugar and lipstick"
My favorite part. It is raw and it is honest, well the entire thing is, but for some reason that part REALLY stood out for me all the way to the (But you wouldn't know) line. Byyyy the way, I miss getting Carl's Jr. burgers with you, and my moron of a cousin. Guess who?
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Posted by Unknown on "Mother Knows Best" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "holy crap, this is freaking amazing. Also, in the sense that I can feel the sadness and it has that strange feelings of connection with me and how I feel estranged as well, from "her"...
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Posted by Unknown on "Mother Knows Best" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "Whoa...Strong feelings, strong images in my mind. This is awesome. You got a real good flow goin on, not to long not to short :-) and the way you express and over analytical mind is brilliant. I'll be sure to continue reading your stuff."
Posted by Ashteroth on "Mother Knows Best" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "There are too many favourite lines here to quote..my fav: 'allow yourself to be consumed by your habitual existance and you will never taste the universe'. That line equates to the choice of being awakened to live or being left mute to what is going on around you and 'die'. Not normally my style of poetry but you have definately caught my eye with this one....xx"
Posted by Crush Room on "Devouring The Universe" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "You conveyed this message so much more elegantly than I ever could and with so much more depth. Oh, how I wish I could put this on my wall of favorites. I'll sit here and marvel for a while. Such beautiful monstrocity...leaves me wondering if it should be a sin to feel this clear-headed...so unpure. Fucking epic piece, an unstoppable flow of words and energy. "
Posted by Unknown on "Devouring The Universe" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "monster bash of poetry; taking rebirth as a firestarting platform to burn once more in hypnotic flames...every sentence spoke of desire, passion and intellect without any means of forcefulness or pseudo-cleverness. Absolute ripper!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Devouring The Universe" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
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