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  • "This is quite beautiful. Don't forget to credit your partner in the copywrite, man. Write on."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "Van Goghs Ear" by bpathos
  • "Just cause I like the saying. An absence of God no more makes religion as the absence of a rocket makes a space program."
    Posted by Unknown on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • ""From her cuts I have learned Truth is the flame, not the burn" - read it again and this stuck out for me. Its how people use truth that is harmful, not truth itself. "
    Posted by Crimson Shade on "Finger Lick'in Truth" by bpathos
  • ""Word museum sentences ripe with meaning" - nice piece, first piece i've enjoyed in a long while."
    Posted by Crimson Shade on "Poet Drown" by bpathos
  • "the idea or notion of the phantasms is excellent because I love that word! Hah! But no....truly, I think this was a thought provoking and greatly constructed piece, speaks volumes and rings many bell-truths....well done :)"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Poet Drown" by bpathos
  • "so much better....ripe in language thought, even when the core of the apple looks rotten...maybe the pawn shops' drowned eyes victim would still wish to bite...tug on God's coat-tail for reassurance...existenalist plight almost"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Poet Drown" by bpathos
  • "hmmmm.....interesting and deep; if only "Graffiti Prophet" had been written more along the lines like this you wouldn't have had to mail me....odd thing life"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • ""to know that you do not know is best, to not know of knowing is a disease" One of my fav quotes. But that aside, again, your sincerity comes through and with certain poignancy with your end line. Yes, we must above all adhere ourselves to treating each o"
    Posted by blue on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "And I've personally found that when I suspend my ego, and the learned behaviours things come a little clearer. This is not to say I have any answers, but more to the point I begin to see my faults in regard to such blind faiths and such."
    Posted by blue on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "There is so much I'd like to add to this, but let me just say this: I commend your insight, your delivery was both intelligent and sincere, and I tend to agree with your points. We all have done it, taken unprovables and made them a truth in our lives. "
    Posted by blue on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "Real proof takes real facts. If all the facts are in essence bricks of faith... the proof becomes a larger product of faith. One can't get a cat from dog parts. Mans finite knowledge base is not sufficent to 'Prove' infinites like truth, facts, ulitmates."
    Posted by bpathos on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "-becomes true to and for us. the way i see it, how can a tiny bacteria proove that it is within or that there is such a thing as a human body? so the same, how can we proove that there is a god or that we are within him?"
    Posted by Unknown on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "when i was younger i always searched for the answer to this question...i studied many many religions trying to find the one that would fit me, one that would lead me to truth. i figured out along the way...we create what is true, if we believe it it becom"
    Posted by Unknown on "Proof of God" by bpathos
  • "poem? If poem I'd say fair enough, if a song I'd suggest it is too abstract in parts to really work or claim an audience....but regardless, good luck - Col "
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Graffiti Prophet" by bpathos
  • "hmm....Tween.....this wasn't my thing; truth be told I liked the title and was disappointed with the outcome, I know you filed it under lyrics but so mant generic rhymes and odd lines that didn't really make much sense...is it supposed to be a song or poe"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Graffiti Prophet" by bpathos
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