Comments by All Members
- "Props for the use of some pretty unique words, i love learning and putting to use words that i never hear anybody say."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- "I enjoy the ornate imagery you illustrate...the landscape is quite Burtonesque in a dark fairytale manner......there was something fervent and decorative about the deathly woods. Nicely written. Thank you for this grim ballet and congrats! "
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- "Lovely nihilistic words! Reminds me when Kerouac said, "there is no world...sometimes I'm walking outside I can see right through the ground." Very philosophical and maybe there is great truth to this."
Posted by Unknown on "ex nihilo nihil fit" by Kurashu
- "I think you missed the last line. A world based on hatred and rage would crumble as surely as it crushes people composed of such."
Posted by Kurashu on "Apollyon" by Kurashu
- "dark, brooding and menacing....to go into the depths beyond 'everything'...in the 'broiling hatred', this was seething madness; at the core of some blackened planet...the magma and tectonics...the volcanic rasp of your words and malice erupting...like a plague, an Armageddon to come...there's an almost paganistic tone to this; strident and fierce....words dripping from the fiery chasms of your ruptured brain....totally wicked!"
Posted by stryder on "Apollyon" by Kurashu
- "I read this several times to let the begets sink in...you are truly a brilliant poet and, most likely, person. Creation in a new light (darkness). "
Posted by Amaryllis on "ex nihilo nihil fit" by Kurashu
- "U-ne-qua
A-yo-hu-hi-s-di?
Reaper of Souls seems disguised,
As the angels sing & demons scream,
Six-thousand-sixty-six ghosts arise
In a ritualistic cemetary dance"
Posted by Unknown on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- "i seriously enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this beautiful piece. similar sentiments that i have been having for awhile. you expressed it well and poetically."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Once Upon A Time" by Kurashu
- "*grinds teeth* You know... I really need to stop doing that... I've worn down most of the enamel on my teeth... But all in all, I agree with the person below me, the writing was pretty amazing."
Posted by Niemand on "Grinding Gears::Teeth" by Kurashu
- "a perfect education in the darkness that you boombastically captivate with these deliciously morbid words and intentions. The whole imagery is potent; full-on; dark fantasy at its finest. I enjoy poems of this nature wholly; write the fuckin' hell on and then some,as Alanarchy would decree! Brilliant stuff..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- "an excellent creepy showcase, a horror poem! And despite its obvious intentions, the word choices were spot on, the freshness seeped through like a perfect wound. It was ugly, full of malice and dark relentless purpose, a full on sludge city fest! I could taste the delicate crimson in my mouth; delicious it was, just like the machinations of this terror-lore poem. Nice!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Prison Cloaca" by Kurashu
- "This is perfect. EXCEPT FOR THE WORD ALABASTER. GOD DAMN YOU, ALABASTER. I WILL SMITE THEE!"
Posted by Unknown on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- ""Perdition and Purgatory hold hands here"...I love these lines. This was salivating right before you projectile vomit."
Posted by Unknown on "Prison Cloaca" by Kurashu
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