Comments by All Members
- "reminds me of some of my own work. Love the flow. Thank you for this write."
Posted by Unknown on "Fuck me!" by Midian
- "I like the honesty and the fact that you're not trying to write fancy its just feelings can't be explained differently as the way they're felt and those who can... (Fake) I respect you for that. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Why am I to be the lonley one?" by Midian
- "Damn this seems so familiar. And I can't help but say sometimes it is right there where touch can be placed, and still no matter what you will never really have. Really nice write."
Posted by unspeakable truth on "What I Can't Have" by Midian
- "I've tried so hard to write this out, but I never could, Thanks so much. I love this write, so in-depth for so few words. Simply exquisite. "
Posted by Err0r on "What I Can't Have" by Midian
- "And I bet you were so sweet at onset. *Agrees with derangedskarlet...but can not help but wonder how prevalent this actually is amongst men...and if women could even touch an innocent(trying to hold back laughter) man...maybe a boy..but that is sick."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Empty Inside" by Midian
- "I like how you recap the emotions of the first stanza in just one line. Very smooth write."
Posted by Err0r on "Intoxication" by Midian
- "This poem holds beauty within, reading it yanked at the very depths of my heart.. Whats life without dreaming of something more then what you have? "
Posted by Revisable Retina on "Intoxication" by Midian
- "I like the premise, the feel of the the fantasy...longing...but the spelling of wine, really threw me, especially with the title you chose."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Intoxication" by Midian
- "damn..... a mental grind begging for release.....insatiable want.... love it."
Posted by elisa on "Fuck me!" by Midian
- "ok. haha! I was all over it until the need to breed part. =) haha. no. fucking. way. I just couldn't have kids. haha. But ya, this was quick and pulsing, moving with a definite flow. Would make a good 45 second hXc song. yupyup. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Fuck me!" by Midian
- "lust is so exciting good poem...i hope your not a virgin i dont think a virgin would write this..."
Posted by Unknown on "Fuck me!" by Midian
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