What I Can't Have

By Midian

I strive for you, though you are intangible.
My heart beats for you, though you are too far away.
I understand you, though I hardly know you.
I want you, though you are what I can’t have.

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© 2007 Midian
Published on Tuesday, July 3, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    uggghhh what a feeling.

  • unspeakable truth On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, unspeakable truth (94)By person wrote:

    Damn this seems so familiar. And I can't help but say sometimes it is right there where touch can be placed, and still no matter what you will never really have. Really nice write. Scholar

  • mysterylove On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, mysterylove (97)By person wrote:

    the perfect way to say it. i always have/get what i want but this time.. he's the one i want and cant have.

  • A former member wrote: you said so much

  • dark_mistress On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, dark_mistress (19)By person wrote:

    So much expressed in so little

  • A former member wrote: These words are all too true. Very nice write

  • Err0r On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    I've tried so hard to write this out, but I never could, Thanks so much. I love this write, so in-depth for so few words. Simply exquisite.

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