Comments by All Members
- "you know...Poe saw a Death Head moth and drew sustenance from the horrific sound it made and of course embellished its size....this made me think Poe eerie-esque Gothic Romanticism, it was formally seductive and it's word choice was emphatically astoundin"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah
- ""He only stared, clutching
A string attached to a mobile raincloud" i can only echo what everyone else has said. the title is great. the imagery is great. this poem is just great. wonderful job. and welcome to DP"
Posted by dying angel on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "i appreciate and am humbled by all your comments. i didn't expect to get such encouraging response so thank you ever so much! i'm a fan of most of you so it means a lot to me."
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "wow, this is impressive. "The young tree clutched at the silhouette dress
of a fat moon" perfect imagery, perfect poem. welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "I think people will want you to stay, a small majority will find your work seriously engaging.....please stay, hahaha....send in at least your postcard matey!! :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "this was absolutely fantastic....without doubt. You're a talent in the making...how old are you? Maybe you're older than I realise, but this is a poem of some incredible impression....I am impressed :p...you can have a Kit-Kat...hehehe"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "the meter was very taut - hexameters with trailing syllables, I'm not fond of the technical indulgence side of it, I can't be arsed to syallble count - shocking isn't it?!?! But the actual notion of approaching this is formal and the words constructed fal"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Dusk White Waif" by nur hidayah
- "So dreamy.. and such a collection of intriguing, vivid words. I especially liked "Her fields of sunflowers garishly dyed red Bloodied while in the path where sunlight gave".. wonderful work here. I enjoyed the structure.
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Posted by Lynaes on "The Dusk White Waif" by nur hidayah
- "oooh....new talent! please do stay. this is such a fantasic entrance. "He just watched, that far seeing boy,
As I stand below blue emptiness" beautiful!"
Posted by verablue on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "Thank you for your kind comments. I've been a mere reader for years now and am honoured to finally be part of the Darkpoetry community!"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "Wow.. this was such a unique display of artistry. I particularly loved "I wish upon a bolt of lightning So as might it would strike him And recharge his cold heart"..
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Posted by Lynaes on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
