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"All I can do is just breathe this in.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"I love this! I generally like the body-as-world imagery and it's done particularly deftly here. Some wonderful, unexpected turns of phrase too. Great write!"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"yes!!....Amen :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"Thank you. Chances are someone IS watching you. Many times I have wished this stranger would know how much she has brought into my life without even knowing my name, without me even seeing her full on her face. People are whole worlds unto themselves."
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"i agree with magic hatter...haunting, but the kind that keeps you coming back for more because you cant forget. so many intense descriptions..."your joyride spine", "sketched bloodline", "topographic sanity"...fantastic."
Posted by verablue on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

""the intense pulses of my orchestra heart" goodness...those last four lines are like stakes driven into the heart...I often wonder, while sitting alone, who might be watching me, whom I might not notice. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"haunting unique poetics with a hint of yeaning and another impressive display of erudite sublime language and imagery; enchanting in its diction and its provacation"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah

"Whoops! Did i say 'sensual'? -i mean to say 'sensuous' *digs bigger hole* -I only ever meant well -i promise! "
Posted by Unknown on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

"Ah Lady Nuri! this is stunning. your imagery is sublime."
Posted by Unknown on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"it's like there are tiny clusters of poetry in this...like constellations in the sky."
Posted by dying angel on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

""The sea, it swayed against my thighs Dancing moon beats"...."I could wear explosions In a glittering tiara And the universe still Would never notice"....there are so many beautiful lines in this. "
Posted by dying angel on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"Thank you for all the kind comments, everybody"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"amazing. the second last stanza really is my favourite. explosions ina glittering tiara. perfectly put."
Posted by evcfenix on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"crackles I like that, like pop-rocks the candy...perfectly described."
Posted by Mylissa on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

""optic static" just crackles on the tongue....lovely :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"this was simply stunning."
Posted by Mylissa on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"a very well crafted and beautiful poem madam.....excellent use of imagery originality and internal crazy rhythms, great work...Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"exquiste poetry from start to finish, I wish my Saturdays were this eventful, this has such kick it it's words they beg to wrap around a tongue like syllabic seducers"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"oh wow, how amazing was that? "
Posted by torn_beauty on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"would my tears flow indigo.. powerfull and niiiiicely done"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"Your words are so elegantly laced together...squeezing out every last drop of beauty."
Posted by Unknown on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"This created a mirror in my mind.. and each stanza reflected the next, a utopia of colorful illustrations.. this was absolutely exquisite.. I'm left breathless."
Posted by Unknown on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"I was intrigued by the 5 minute memory fish and tongueing the beyond..hmm"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah

"fairest of play! I can only blush dear lady! Should've know by the soft and sensual tone of your words!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

"oh hehehe....I must confess I also thought you male, how terrible is this....well, you're having quite the effect......... madam, respect :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

"Thank you, raskal. The only trouble is, kind commentor, I am a lady, not a sir. =)"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

"This poem is wonderful -to be so emotive in so few words is an achievement in itself -your imagery is soft and dreamy -I applaud you sir.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

"i have read this before and i totally thought i commented. anyhoo i really enjoyed this. keep em coming. NL"
Posted by NapoleonsLust on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah

"oh my...intense. the imagery was so breathtaking. "Orange paper sun scattering its liquid ashes"...you are spectacular. i'm in love with your words.."
Posted by dying angel on "The Dusk White Waif" by nur hidayah

"god, you're just so amazing. i loved the first stanza. "
Posted by dying angel on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah

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