Comments by All Members
- "...on the other hand this isnt a farce cuz my writing TRULY cums from me. i like your comment Zane- but im not THAT bad :-)"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx for the comments. if its disturbing and you DONT like it than i think thats still ok. some of the thingz i write, im drawing from my own feelings and amplifying them for dramatic effect so-2-speak, but i hope i dont worry anyone. on the other hand thi"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "yeah, i agree with Seraphim about him being a pedophile. i can almost hear him breathing heavily as he watches the girl. i can almost hear her screams. sad write. -Nuri"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "hey hat/han-if u were as u try & appear,
i would think u would not get off on the
tedious business of this poetry site!!
LOL!!!u'd B out stabbing some poor kid.
seriously, i'm just fuckin w/ U. if U
need 2 torture, share 1st..."
Posted by zanewill on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "there is no punishment for the truly
sick & weary of soul, but existence with
themselves. death is something I think
one should "relax into"...the burning
horrible inside is only extinguished by
insanely brave hearts!!!GOOD write/luck"
Posted by zanewill on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "very profound that this came from the same place as the sick man. thanx for ur comment on my stuff.
write-on"
Posted by zanewill on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx shards. i was try to get a broken-rhyme sound and thats why it doesnt flow well. sort of experimenting cuz i get sick of making easy-listening rhymes. kno wut i mean? thx 4 your comments."
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo
- "thx alot tania and drea. i originally thought this sounded over-the-top, but this poem describes exactly what i envisioned doing to the prosecutor... to me its just a fun fantasy - not too deep of a poem or anything"
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Ice Princess" by HattoriHanzo
- "You had some good lines.. I think my favorite was.. "Fresh is the fruit from your blessed branches the seasons bring around." Write on.
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Posted by Drea on "Sacred Garden" by HattoriHanzo
- "this was one of the more popular poems people liked when i was in jail. i thought i'd get more feedback on this writing. oh well. :-) "
Posted by HattoriHanzo on "Ice Princess" by HattoriHanzo
- "Concept well conveyed. It could flow a bit better in the first 2 stanzas, but you ended very strongly. I love that last stanza. Powerful. Concluded the piece well."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo
