Comments by All Members
- "Very vidid and so true.. how often do we find ourselves wondering about the person in the next lane when we stop at the traffic lights.. well, I do all the time..great write."
Posted by Tania on "life in cars" by jack paper
- "Like plowing down I-64 with good tunes blaring and the sun on your shades. I brake for tail. lol. great write."
Posted by Alanarchy on "life in cars" by jack paper
- "No better a way to deal with traffic than to imagine the lives of those behind other wheels and to where they are off to. Lovely interpretation. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "life in cars" by jack paper
- "loved this story. =)"red light
red as the lips
of the raven haired beauty
in the south turn lane of the
I-80 interchange" turning strangers into poetic characters...oh how i love that."
Posted by dying angel on "life in cars" by jack paper
- "haha instant lust..wicked exchanges that catch us off guard and put a thrill in our veins...brilliant and i love the comic almost sarcastic twist ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "life in cars" by jack paper
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