Comments by All Members
- "... these formatted writes suit my reading preferences precisely, and have me hoping that the writer strives to make the next even more immmaculate than the last...very well done on this..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "A Bad Goodbye" by darth ren
- "...the rhyme is almost head on, which is good for us poets, and the rhythm is damn near perfect as well; I also niticed that you kept the actual story going well, even with the restrictions of a rhyme scheme..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "A Bad Goodbye" by darth ren
- "i just recently added the third stanza, i felt that it was missing something, like there needed to be more struggle to get the darkness out. thanks for the comments guys"
Posted by darth ren on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
- ""All of me, the darkness now contains" I don't normally like rhyme/structucre as much as I liked this one. Kudos for that. Write on, and welcome to darkpoetry."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Shroud of Darkness" by darth ren
