Comments by All Members
- "Kito, I just now found all these beautiful poems you wrote. I never knew you were such a good writer! I love you and miss you so much-Even though we only knew eacother briefly, you touched my life in a way not many people can. You probably changed so many people's lives just by glancing at them, Kito. You are right that what's inside of you cannot die-I know it didn't die. You still live on, helping people and spreading your love to everyone. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
- "The feelings you describe... are all too familiar, their sneering grin as you struggle... as you suffer... A nice write (a few typo's) "
Posted by Unknown on "Shattered Heart" by slightlygothic89
- "That wasn't fair, really, because your poem kicked ass. Just what I thought of at the time. I didn't intend to write that. You are right, relationships are hard and you wore it all in this poem. kept my attention well.
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Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
- "It was complete, perfect, except for one thing.
You left out all the good times,
sympathy thief
learn from the torture, the sadness, the grief
you'll be a father some day too, with kids that you'll try to teach"
Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
- "you've got some major talent, and dont let anyone tell you otherwise.. this is a great write, you have so much passion for this.. you gave me something to look forward to.. great write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "There is a place..." by slightlygothic89
- "this stole my heart and told me i had to comment.. i used to feel the same way, be the same way.. everything.. inside i still am. but I've turned most of my life around and im sure you will too soon enough... great work - a couple of spelling mistakes tho"
Posted by mywristshurt on "The Man I Should Have Been" by slightlygothic89
- "your quaundry.....can be more clear....even with the body of your prose.......your approach....the answer has begun with your words.........well done.........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "I.L.L." by slightlygothic89
- "I know the feeling very well- I've been questioning love so much the last few weeks. But truth be told, everybody has different definitions of love, not all hearts are the same. Some of us do know how to love and show love in a healthy way."
Posted by Unknown on "Want This?..." by slightlygothic89
- "A wonderfully tragic loss begins with the gift. You know how lonely you are without the one you love yet are connected by the open lines of communication with your betrothed...Some people stay with their partners this way...giving and taking by this, kno"
Posted by Unknown on "the slip" by slightlygothic89
