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The Man I Should Have Been
By slightlygothic89
The man I should have been
Isn't dressed in black
The man I should have been
Would have never turned his back
The man I should have been
Has judgment and self respect
The man I should have been
Has a life without defect
I'm not the man I should have been
I wear black
I've turned my back
And,yes I lack respect
But I smile and keep on living
Life and its after effect
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© 2006 Kito Bizieff
Published on Tuesday, December 5, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Man I Should Have Been"
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella
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wrote:
wonderful write I really loved this:)
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On Tuesday, December 5, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
this stole my heart and told me i had to comment.. i used to feel the same way, be the same way.. everything.. inside i still am. but I've turned most of my life around and im sure you will too soon enough... great work - a couple of spelling mistakes tho
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A former member wrote:
This is a very good write. I think we all in one way or the other feel we should be a different man or women.
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