Entrancing

By slightlygothic89

This too was found the the deep folds of my binder... no idea when it was written. Its also not finished. no idea when i'll finish it...

You thought that you defeat me
(So I’ll just discreetly)
Silence your voice so that nobody heeds the
(Let your) mind hear the words
(Let your) soul feel the wounds
(Let your) heart vanquish now because you’ll be dying soon
(If you had a life to waste, would you cherish or take it?)
Or a perfect love, would you cope with or break it
(If you had a choice to make, would you sacrifice it all?)
Or just be like Adam and let mankind fall?

Sin the only answer
A drug to fight off cancer
Death is dancing
The virus is advancing
The pain so harsh severe
Entrancing


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© 2007 Kito Bizieff
Published on Friday, March 2, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • SilentDreamer On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, SilentDreamer (7)By person wrote:

    So far it's really good. The flow is nice, I think it may make a nice song once it is done.

  • Dark Nymph On Friday, March 2, 2007, Dark Nymph (25)By person wrote:

    This is pretty awesome... I'd like to see this finished! - Tashia

  • A former member wrote: that is a damn good write considering it's not finished yet!

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