Comments by All Members
- "Very powerful, this is awesome. I love the way you used a whisper in this piece. everyone might view this differently than I have but I precieve the whisper as the subconcious trying to tell the main character that no matter what change will occcur, thi"
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "The Seed Part II" by asailorsangel
- "I like this style of writing, free verse is my fav to write in. You planned this one out very well, and it came through as a wonderful read."
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "Sinking" by asailorsangel
- "Very interesting poem. I love roses. They symbolize (spellcheck) so much. Very well written. I really enjoyed reading it."
Posted by Unknown on "The Seed" by asailorsangel
- "Wow. I have to admit, I was put to amazement. The style was so different, and it made for a great poem. I am new around here, but I will say that this has been one of the best pieces I have seen so far. I hope to see more great works like this one."
Posted by Raze Drake on "Sinking" by asailorsangel
- "you, my lady, illustrated a beautiful story in this. Tough love is sometimes the only path which to go by. excellent poem, i thank you once again"
Posted by Unknown on "The Seed" by asailorsangel
- "it seems after a while that the pursuit is endless, until one chooses the ground on which to fight; thx for the read"
Posted by Unknown on "Sinking" by asailorsangel
- "wow... that really touched inside me! :“Take this tear, it should sustain you for awhile, it has more heart, soul and love in it than any of the others.” “WHY?” the rose asked. “Because it is the last”: this part was pretty AWESOME! I <3 it! :)"
Posted by diavolessa on "The Seed" by asailorsangel
