Comments by All Members
- "I love it...I love how you repeat the words...wonderful...the last line perfects the piece"
Posted by Unknown on "The Brink" by Moratha
- "Brilliant work! I wish to see more of this from you since it reaches from deep within your soul and mind. I agree with this too completely of course and feel this way...about you. "
Posted by Unknown on "Virtual Perception" by Moratha
- "Excellent job, you have a true gift with words and know how to construct a mental/emotional setting well. And I agree with here 100%. You are a wonderful poetess, very deep. "
Posted by Unknown on "Eulogy of Hope" by Moratha
- "A wish of nothingness. If so then I have had this same wish my sweet, though it is slow coming, no?
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Posted by Mord on "The Eve" by Moratha
- "Yup, now I have to bring out one similar, I wasnt going to cause they manifested from a haze of pot smoke and I figured I'd get laughed at. Thanks for the inspiration to not give up on who we really are inside. She's not buried that deep, time to exhume. "
Posted by Mord on "The Brink" by Moratha
- "I absolutely LOVE the line, The circle of life wanes for me, waxes for you. Hunny, you're the shit, do you know that? "
Posted by Mord on "The Cusp" by Moratha
- "Omg that is soo sweet..chokes me up. I know all about this. "
Posted by Mord on "Of You" by Moratha
- "Absolutely hits home with me!! You couldnt have penned this any better! I have 2 boys and they are literally me!! Just a wonderful job!"
Posted by Unknown on "Of You" by Moratha
- "egads...how I know this one, I still cling onto the snuggles...not all the way here yet. Exciting and..sigh, a lil sad."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Of You" by Moratha
- "Hell is for children-Pat Benatar
Glad that you've come to that place...I just want my kids to be quiet so I can take a nap...and not wake up to blanket of cereal on floor and poop on a wall, or equivalent.. :)-- then live to rock again!"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Eulogy of Hope" by Moratha
- "i can only echo Aunty, i got the same impression, the balance, the sweet simplicty that is so impactful. "
Posted by Dei on "Almost" by Moratha
- "we live in a time, that to not know, is a blessed retreat, a sweet release, and sometimes, the ones that don't want to know of suck pain will never get it, when 'WE' suddenly fall away from the world of hated.....a world of ignornace"
Posted by beautifulfallenangel on "Blessed Ignorance" by Moratha
- "Again, a unique approach delivered as a most crushing vocalization of solititude, regret, and pain. This struck a chord."
Posted by Unknown on "Regretfully Yours" by Moratha
- ""Where is your paradise? I left mine with you." I adore those lines. Beautifully rendered, the repetition was a bit of a unique approach that worked rather nicely here. Thank you. Well done.
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Posted by Unknown on "The Brink" by Moratha
- "I'm with disturbing on this one, the end fucking sold me. it reminds me of i song...i thouroughly enjoyed this."
Posted by call to arms on "The Brink" by Moratha
- "Crushing and it reminds me of a song "Look what I've built. It shines so beautifully. Now watch as it destroys me..." Great work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Luxurious Neglect" by Moratha
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