Comments by All Members
- ""You abandoned me far behind with
the heart you stole, useless, between my hands." This piece is painfully familiar to me....reminds me of one I wrote called Seeping Tourniquet i love the way you expressed both anger and pain without distoring either fe"
Posted by Unknown on "Shards and Residue" by Mord
- "*grinz* this reminded me of a couple of my own pieces. One in particular called "Open Your Eyes" reading your poetry is almost like looking in a mirror for me.....no wonder I like it :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Messiahs Grace" by Mord
- "No no i'm pretty sure that title has been taken.....I am sin, you...are temptation >;) This is beautiful i feel almost like a kindred soul, again the more i read the more i need"
Posted by Unknown on "It's all about me" by Mord
- "O_o then someone needs to teach her :P no kidding i don't know the muse for this poem but i love the poem! I do feel sorry for the muse though...I have a strict policy of letting go and enjoying sin. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Heat" by Mord
- "MMm wow my but you do have a way with words! You are so vivid and the way you choose to describe things and the way you use analogies is just breath taking wow, the more of your poetry i read the more I want to devour it"
Posted by Unknown on "In the eye of the beholder" by Mord
- "lord do i know this prayer....inside and out. I liked this, ty for posting it"
Posted by Unknown on "Release Me..." by Mord
- "What vivid imagery :) I loved this it is refreshing to the mind"
Posted by Unknown on "admiration" by Mord
- "It is truly unfortunate that your pieces are neglected by the masses. Each of your works are so lush with vitality and gloom and decadence, and well..everything! Write on, I love this."
Posted by Mathesix on "Messiahs Grace" by Mord
- "I love the archaic feel of your works, like something dredged from times lost and forgotten."
Posted by Mathesix on "Untitled" by Mord
- "This flows along in abject melancholy, a sufferage of loss and loneliness, a beautiful song in such heart-rending atmosphere. Most wonderful. -Josh"
Posted by Mathesix on "Untitled" by Mord
- "2nd stanza: 'hurray' should be 'hurrah', 'comming' should be 'coming', 'ones' should be 'one's', 'with out' should be 'without'. 3rd stanza: 'their' should be 'they're', 'comming' should be 'coming', and 'riegning' should be 'reigning'. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Ode To a Vet" by Mord
- "Twas clever. I almost never nitpick on spelling, but I hate to see something nice get ignored because of the errors, so:"
Posted by Unknown on "Ode To a Vet" by Mord
- "So full of emotion and simplified complexity. I actually felt the hoplessness and anger. Well said... "
Posted by Moratha on "Residue" by Mord
- "Wonderfully put, graceful pace. This beautifully reflects how so many of us feel."
Posted by Moratha on "Messiahs Grace" by Mord
- "Although I don't think that I believe in what you believe, I can say that this is an absolutely exquisite piece. Very beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "admiration" by Mord
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