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admiration
By Mord
Seraphim smooth and white, why are you saddened so,
With downy wings that brush the ground
hanging heavy with winter snow.
Upon your knees you pray your plight,
With a holy vigilance within,
On your shoulders slumped wings do fight against past mortal sins.
Yet guard you do my mortal doom,
To be released unto this hallowed moon,
I thank you for your prayer tonight.
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© 2006 Mord
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On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm
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wrote:
I wonders what happens tomorrow...
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On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
This is simply beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
What vivid imagery :) I loved this it is refreshing to the mind
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On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
serene and lovely ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
Although I don't think that I believe in what you believe, I can say that this is an absolutely exquisite piece. Very beautiful.
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
oooook... not what i really expected, but you write better than i can
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
i enjoyed this. it plays a story of a madman torturing his mom and being oblivious of it. still she prays. 669
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