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"Whoa..... Had to smoke a cigarette before commenting on this one. Love it. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "The First Time" by image

"Comical and sad all at once. That's hard to capture. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!" by image

"I like this a little erotica but not much just the right amount then some love at the end very sweet I enjoyed the read"
Posted by Unknown on "Love is the Controller (Evolution 3 of 3)" by image

"WOW!!! Hello there... Pretty damn good!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "The First Time" by image

"Poetic Element: 8/10 points Meter: 4/5 points Format: 5/5 points Creative Merit: 7/10 points -------- Total : 24/30 -x-"
Posted by Unknown on "Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!" by image

"Very erotic. Carnal. But I don't see love anywhere in this. Maybe it's only about the lust."
Posted by Rowan on "The First Time" by image

"Male, but ok. "impaling you self on me..." "Massaged to stiffness" :)"
Posted by image on "The First Time" by image

"Its like being 15 all over again. From a female perspective. Good work"
Posted by Unknown on "The First Time" by image

"short and to the point. it was nice"
Posted by RubyXero on "The First Time" by image

"Steamy stuff from your imagination. And you are not "late"...there is no set time. Maybe you are the rare creature that actually waits for love to be involved. Enjoyed the writing ;)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "The First Time" by image

"Carnal pleasure. It's only human to engage and enjoy it :]"
Posted by Unknown on "The First Time" by image

"Lust, sub come to it we all do lol"
Posted by Unknown on "Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!" by image

"Mmmmm the pain of rejection. We have all felt it at one time or another. A shooting pain...from stomach to heart. Damn. Simple but good writing."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!" by image

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