Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!

Look at her sit there all proper 'n tight

Under the shirt my goal is tonight

Soon to hear 'no' he's a better deal

Too much competition, but I just wanted a feel

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Published on Saturday, February 27, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Repentance: You can look but you can't touch!"

On Thursday, February 22, 2018, Just Dave (457) wrote:

Comical and sad all at once. That's hard to capture. JD
A former member wrote: Poetic Element: 8/10 points Meter: 4/5 points Format: 5/5 points Creative Merit: 7/10 points -------- Total : 24/30 -x-
A former member wrote: Lust, sub come to it we all do lol
On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193) wrote:

Mmmmm the pain of rejection. We have all felt it at one time or another. A shooting pain...from stomach to heart. Damn. Simple but good writing.