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The First Time
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The way I imagine the first time
Forced to the bed
Tied to the frame
Massaged to stiffness
So soft is your touch
You've teased me for so long
I cant wait any more
So you start to undress
Your show so erotic
With lust in your eyes
You ask me if its ok
Can you be the first?
Without question today
Impaling yourself on me again and again
Finally we cum together in sin
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Copyright 2010 dumb
Published on Saturday, February 27, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
If you Don't know me, and most of you don't, rest assured I'm late on this seemingly important date (20ish yrs old)Comments on "The First Time"
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On Thursday, February 22, 2018, Just Dave
(457)
wrote:
Whoa..... Had to smoke a cigarette before commenting on this one. Love it. JD
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On Friday, November 25, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
WOW!!! Hello there... Pretty damn good!!!
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Rowan
(202) wrote:
Very erotic. Carnal. But I don't see love anywhere in this. Maybe it's only about the lust.
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A former member wrote:
Its like being 15 all over again. From a female perspective. Good work
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, image
(8) wrote:
Male, but ok. "impaling you self on me..." "Massaged to stiffness" :)
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
short and to the point. it was nice
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193) wrote:
Steamy stuff from your imagination. And you are not "late"...there is no set time. Maybe you are the rare creature that actually waits for love to be involved. Enjoyed the writing ;)
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A former member wrote:
Carnal pleasure. It's only human to engage and enjoy it :]
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