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- "This is amazing.. I've had moments like this.. just one thing that someone says that has a big impact on you internally.. and they have no idea. Brilliant."
Posted by Lynaes on "dear old man." by i tremble
- "This reminds me that its the simple things that this holiday is all about - I sure envy those who can cherish the simple pleaseure of christmas. beautiful write."
Posted by Narcissa on "dear old man." by i tremble
- "This was extremely touching. Funny, how little experiences can shape us more than big ones, sometimes. You conveyed the moment and it's impact perfectly."
Posted by Unknown on "dear old man." by i tremble
- "ouch. i can understand that reaction. especially depending on the situation. this was simple yet intense. "
Posted by RubyXero on "dear old man." by i tremble
- "I really enjoyed this read it truely is amazing how easily off gaurd we could be taken just by a few words...great write hon:)"
Posted by italianbella on "dear old man." by i tremble
- "this is different from what you usually write. it's always good to experiment. "
I nail your dirty hands
to my faded green,
wall-paper-peeling
bedroom wall
and throw darts
dipped in
negative emotion
at your grotesquely large head."...to me, this f"
Posted by dying angel on "my very own personal savior." by i tremble
- "very interesting take here, everyone destroys but its what they replace it with that matters, if u just destroythen woe is to you, but if you destroy and replace, esp with something beautiful, then you have fullfilled the cycle. nice work thanks for shari"
Posted by Unknown on "destroy something beautiful to create something new." by i tremble
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