Comments by All Members
- "I nice little decadent lullaby...sweetly stretched and spread in the dark matter of imagination...volcanic chanting...let theat lava solidify into words; molten flavoured...excellent..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "volcanoes and stardust." by i tremble
- ""it has finally/come down/to this,/after everything." Falling apart like ribbons from a bow is a painful thing. Even more painful is looking back on all the happiness you used to hold, knowing that goodbye has ruined the moments. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "after everything." by i tremble
- "This was beautiful. Feeling trapped inside something only for others, like their toy to play with, to listen to. Wonderful. You must upgrade or we will all haunt you!! :)"
Posted by K_Love on "the girl in the musicbox." by i tremble
- "Beautiful.. there's an almost eerie, musical aura about this write. Like the tinkle of musicbox over complete silence. Very well done. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "the sandman." by i tremble
- "i really liked this..very smooth flow, i had no trouble getting through this. great write, welcome to dp. "
Posted by Unknown on "the sandman." by i tremble
- "I like the different slant of the sandman...far more unsettling, as I know myself, I have explored a more sinister "Sandman" in some poems...and when I sleep, I sleep with acid in my eyes..Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the sandman." by i tremble
