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- ""I'm eating sub-conscious kubrik's again" This is structured visually wOnderfull w/ a splendid title; & the random beat of sub-über-umbra nature is respondant of clockwork in agent orange shades (a milkBar in Alex's hell -maybe too much on my part)..."
Posted by Unknown on "Dadaism in slow-motion" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "yes alos Nihilst; anti-establishment and against the bougeois attitudes, these movements have long inspired and influenced me in my own 21st century ish way...I reckon :P...haha, I like ze avant guarde feel of your approach ere' :P"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Dadaism in slow-motion" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "I have a poem called 'Hobbyhorse' which of course is what the French word Dada is, so I love this...2subconcious Kubrick's"? is it meant to be?? Nonetheless, this is my kind of thing...fresh original and offbeat...Dada poetics...niceeeee!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Dadaism in slow-motion" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""Like loving and losing your own Annabel Lee" (In her sepulchre there by the sea). I love the Edgar Allan tintinnabulation, in your Poe-esque bells; the subtle chilling ring. And even w/out the mention of the repeating name Humbert Humbert, in the..."
Posted by Unknown on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "...escaping like the "Jingling-jangling" I could feel the narration of that protagonist buried in those cold bells "groaning and moaning". Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "I love the nostalgic expression of this...like poetry to the Playstation generation...tongues out, such an eloquent charm and a fun idea...Shinobi, Megadrives...Tetris...I can see it all happening....videodrome syllabics....a COOL comeback kiddo!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mortal Kombat Memories" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "this brings back memories -we did the same after school-street fighter 2 (sweetness) or Mortal Kombat -I liked subzero - you could rip the spinal column or kano -grab the heart but he was a bit sh*t other then his death move."
Posted by Unknown on "Mortal Kombat Memories" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""the percussion eyes
flashing blue-electric" I love the rhythm & beat of this poem... and the title is fantastic. There's a certain Mona Lisa painted touch to this one. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Venus Beat Overdrive" by Rebel_not_Radical
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