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""nicotine rusted mind" that's great. And the alliterations that aren't simultaneous really help with the flow..overall I think this is wonderful"
Posted by hate_doll on "When i tried writing about hangovers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"I like it a lot, but I think it would be better if you did away with a few of the cliches like "praying to the porcelain god" and "razorblade smiles" because I think your mind could come up with something much better, like "
Posted by hate_doll on "When i tried writing about hangovers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"All of my favorite lines've been quoted and judged... and this entire piece broke my heart in several places - wonderful, and amazing. It's difficult for me to feel through words these days, and you hit me square in the chest. This is an impeccable write."
Posted by Cassandra on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

""Hey can you help me find my color wheel?" First: The Title is Fantastic.The concept is quite fantastical;soft & subtle;makes me think of the smokeghost in Gibson's "Mona Lisa Overdrive", even though they really are not even close (weird, or wired)..."
Posted by Unknown on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"...This is almost simple, and almost complex; it has me walking almost too far off... "And she tugged at my sleeve Where I wear my heart." Niiccccee!"
Posted by Unknown on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

""I'll give anything to gear the clockwork of time backwards baby" Stunning; absolutely gorgeous. I love the almost Blues (as in music) & the pulsing passion in the poetry of the heart. Faraway, so close. Love the title; it's the supernova of the poem..."
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"...(poe)m. The 'telephone wires' verse did it for me; it broke me down. I felt this one. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"hehe, this is very cute and flawless in its sismplicity. "
Posted by hate_doll on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"A marvelous expression of longing and regret. "-I'll give anything to gear the clockwork of time backwards baby-" - Right on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

""We engage in a war needing niether ammunition nor humanity" this line =awesome"
Posted by Unknown on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical

"mate this was beautific and well crafted...intelligetly sombre...a swoon and a sigh from even me!!! Haha...heartbeat poetry I think it's called...amazing bud..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"Broke my heart in places I didn't know could break, Tetch! This is something I feel deep into my soul. Just want you to know that. Well done. Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"stunning images.. with a quiet, lovely, lonely feeling. some lines made me gasp as you drew innocence and yearning together. to feel at your depth, and envision these emotions as art is quite exquisite."
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"that ending..damn. such an amazingly sad poem.."It remembers me of your silky black hair slipping through my fingers like you did-" i could see this entire poem. excellent write, tetchy."
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

""I wish they were...you..." *sighs* You've captured a moment in time, freeze-framing the world so it can revolve around you and see what you feel...and my, I feel it with you. Excellent. ~*Beth*~ "
Posted by Unknown on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"the title of this drew me in and I'm so glad i read it .. from what I've read of you so far, you most certainly have a very unique voice .. i like it a lot =)"
Posted by mozarts cat on "Biscuit Wallpaper Art" by Rebel_not_Radical

"'In broken notes i shall resonate "love me" ' .. this is both cruel and otherworldly .. i adore it =) "
Posted by mozarts cat on "The Mannequin Sings" by Rebel_not_Radical

""I would love it if it happened on a rainy november when we walked hand-in-hand" shit. you just want my heart to stop beating dont you."
Posted by dying angel on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"Like flowers wilting in reverse / To see the petals form a ghost of a flower .. this is timeless .. beautifully crafted .. the imagery is sublime! "
Posted by mozarts cat on "Red Like The Color of Wine and Flowers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"just completely, and simply beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"I may as well just faint now. Brilliant, and just enough pain to peek through. Damn, you guys are killin' me! Well done. Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"like Thames reflected in moonlight waters of the mind, so distilled into profound seminal sadness...a really distinctve piece, for your age.....unbelieveable, top work..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"*sighs* I loved this one, my eyes were dancing with beauty that you sprinkled into them, and the words floated into my heart and stayed until there was no energy left to sustain such weight, of great words ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"Loved it all, especially the way you ended it (Loved that pulling drop toward eternity), even though I was a little bit dissapointed when it actually did end. Nice work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

""And she tugged at my sleeve/Where I wear my heart/sometimes..." You caught at my heart with the very first word and drew me in so deeply, I could barely risk taking my eyes from the screen before the end. Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"damn. *fav*"
Posted by dying angel on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

"~im damned honored to be bookmarked by you...and i mean DAMN!...thank you very much it is a great honor"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Cube . Man" by Rebel_not_Radical

"Damn. This flat-out fucking rocks! *Click."
Posted by Unknown on "Cube . Man" by Rebel_not_Radical

"im with julia on this one. astounding job. your poetry always makes me feel like dancing."
Posted by dying angel on "Cube . Man" by Rebel_not_Radical

"Your incredible my dear friend, you create magic from the very fingertips you write with the emotions and come out surprise me and capture me again and again ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Cube . Man" by Rebel_not_Radical

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