Comments by All Members
- "Great poem especially the lines, "Sometimes I wish the world would end and then we would be free/I need to be way from this/I need to be free from this," where the poem tries to make a turn for the better away from the darkness."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Sometimes/I need/I want" by Emma Lee
- "been on this carousel before...I think the brevity and the impac of the final 2lines make it fine as it is...short, punchy and enlightening...nice one!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Would you?" by Emma Lee
- "WOW ... amazing ... I would have went a lil further with this .. but truely wonderful .. and I wish I could not be afraid .. but fear runs my life :) ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "Would you?" by Emma Lee
- "Excellent write. simple, honest, and brief. I hope you can get fucked. Tis a fickle escape from the doldrums of routine."
Posted by LordBrosnian on "Would you?" by Emma Lee
- "Lol, I figured you might ask that.
He was a music artist/poet from the late 60s, and early 70s. His lyrics were rather out of his mind. He basically went mad, and became a recluse. Died last month. Sorry if it still doesnt make sense."
Posted by Eric on "Huh?" by Emma Lee
- "Haha I loved this, the punch into the face with anyone who thinks something about you, I know how this goes and very much the same way, don't-really-give-a-shit-what-you-think Indeed. ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Slut" by Emma Lee
- "Love this. It has a Syd Barrett feel to it. Like someone losing their mind.
Wonderful write!!"
Posted by Eric on "Huh?" by Emma Lee
- "i like that one it really makes you think about things forgotten"
Posted by Unknown on "Huh?" by Emma Lee
- "God, this hurt my heart so bad. I know how it feels to wait. I know how it feels to beg. I hope that you stand up and be strong. They tend to notice you then..."
Posted by Savannah on "I am" by Emma Lee
- "Perhaps you are looking for something in the wrong places. You seem so angry. Don't let words hurt you so. Those ARE your own rules to break."
Posted by Savannah on "Slut" by Emma Lee
- "Way to tell it. Defiant, yet proud. Sounds like a moment of standing up for yourself. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Slut" by Emma Lee
- "wow, i found this to be absolutely amazing.."I stumble onto the beach,
The moon alone greets me, and welcomes me home." i love the beach, and the imagery in this was lovely..and that last line was fabulous. welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm running" by Emma Lee
- "beautifully realistic how the peace of the water and all it's salvation does not erase the memories of what came before. Your honesty shines through like the foam on the tide..."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm running" by Emma Lee
- "i really like you. upgrade now! i want more. hehe. i love the beach too. it's so calming especially at night."
Posted by dying angel on "I'm running" by Emma Lee
- "this really hits me hard. i felt every word. it's like you're questioning yourself but at the same time you're questioning everyone around you. welcome to dp. "
Posted by dying angel on "I am" by Emma Lee
- "quite a shimmering haunting effect at the end, the quiet eerie feel of the beach...I like the precise use of concentrated imagery, very evocative and lush...thanx for the ride - Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I'm running" by Emma Lee
- "yes many welcomes, I am the Fear..he he, I liked the questioning essence of this post, do you see my soul...reminds me of Uncle/DJ Shadow..top notch I enjoyed!! Colin."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "I am" by Emma Lee
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