Comments by All Members
- "raw emotion usually makes the most moving poetry. well done, i love it! whoever preys upon your heart this often is a rather lucky person.."
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "wow... this was a beautiful poem.. you have fantastic writing skills, and you should write like this more often.. If you need me, you know you can contact me. And this poem, simply amazing how you put it into words."
Posted by mywristshurt on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "damn...I never cut...but...that doesn't mean I didn't consider it very seriously a couple times. This...well...I'm speechless. I just...damn...very powerful. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "'you say that i never cared im afraid to show you how much I do so when you take a look at my very arms know that I did this for you' this...hits way to close 2 home for me for comfort..cause, im guilty of being an ex cutter...and tears escape my wounded "
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- "woah... that was deep. i really like the tears part. i cry myself to sleep sometimes too, but i have a few tears left in this shell of a person..."
Posted by Unknown on "My Sobbing Wrists" by Fading_Smile
- ""Birds see you and fly south in summer
ashamed, your beauty is greater" & "
You've spent days in my dreams have I been in one of yours for half a second?" so dazzling and impressive. you are quite the talented poet. "
Posted by Unknown on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile
- "i've read this so many times, and i can honestly say this is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry i have ever had the privilige of reading..everything was simply perfect about this, all the details, images..just gorgeous."
Posted by Unknown on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile
- "Elegant and fragile. I liked this one, dude. It was like drinking vodka and lime for the first time with someone who just keeps getting closer with every shot. "When you borrowed the wings of the butterlfly..." Good stuff, man."
Posted by Alanarchy on "You're the angel I knew you were" by Fading_Smile
- "damn...you know you've talent when you get this many comments after one day! This piece...it's wonderful, it really truly is. Excellently done..and as you've heard already, welcome to dp! ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile
- ""Will you fade with much craved sunsets?
Dead pocket watches and grandfather clocks smothered by one thousand ill ticks" wow, this was amazing. very beautiful, i'm very impressed. welcome to dp, please stay. :) ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile
- "i agree with everyone it was a great write and i felt it very touching keep up the good work and i hope to read more of you. btw thanks for the comments you left me. keep up the good work! ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile
- ""My brail trophy" what a fresh concept. I did enjoy this. I'd even go so far as to say I enjoyed the hell out of it. Loved your phrasing, your prose. Welcome to DP. I'm sure you'll fit right in. Just don't take my seat on the couch."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile
- "this is one of the coolest poems i've seen... and thanks for the comment you left.. i agree with empty, welcome.. you're work is very complete and very much a work of art.. if you ever need to talk, im almost always on dp"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Hiding Behind the Picture Frame" by Fading_Smile
