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  • "Self-preservation cancels out selflessness, which, from the "narrator's" (not really mine) perspective, is a load of crap basically. The person in question would much rather see a 100% selfless world."
    Posted by Cassandra on "white memoirs:opaque gargoyles" by Cassandra
  • "I don't think its selfish to preserve ones own life - very situational idea that one...but point taken and hesitantly accepted. imagination repression 1's and 2's black and white exposition of reality"
    Posted by Solace on "white memoirs:opaque gargoyles" by Cassandra
  • "This was quite an attempt I must say - has all the makings and trappings of a genius - a few lines were halting - but most were inspiring and eloquent"
    Posted by Solace on "a braille catastrophy" by Cassandra
  • "i'll be keeping an eye on you love you write brilliantly, with topics im sure everyone here at DP can relate to, or at least try to relate through your poignant use of imagery..."
    Posted by Guillotine on "a braille catastrophy" by Cassandra
  • "i had to smile when i read this...so much talent at such a tender age...I bow in admiration...this is an insanely awesome piece...great, great, great write ~sinful~"
    Posted by Unknown on "shards of epilepsy" by Cassandra
  • "Ha ha - I am in shotgun phantom fields of Elysium. Somewhere to the left I think my head is rolling down a stream. I better go retrieve it, might need it to feedbck some awesome talent soon!"
    Posted by Shadow Rapture on "shards of epilepsy" by Cassandra
  • "F**ckin hell!!Are you sure of your age??Reminds me of a Ginsberg-ish influence the way you construct lines.Have you read the beats.Your seriously impressive!"
    Posted by Shadow Rapture on "shards of epilepsy" by Cassandra
  • ""yet the question is how ..and our pasts are stamped in white on opaque irises - invisible"- just one of the lines i'd like to quote here..this was just splendid..sheer art, writ to perfection. i couldn't find any flaws here, just stunning poetry."
    Posted by Unknown on "white memoirs:opaque gargoyles" by Cassandra
  • "i'm in shock that your only 14..you write with the maturity of someone much older..that said, this is just amazing..purr quoted my favorite line, haha. you have such an intoxicating way with words, swift and artful. i really hope you stay."
    Posted by Unknown on "a braille catastrophy" by Cassandra
  • "i really like your style..it's very intelligent with unique and lovely wordings. "lustful shadow of vengeful tequilla sunsets" i loved the images i got in this poem..just wonderful."
    Posted by Unknown on "jack.hammered [dys]topia" by Cassandra
  • "of your work. (One - probably stupid - question: the spelling of 'catastrophy': deliberate 'Y' for 'trophy' rather than the usual 'catastrophe'? If so...that's some nice worddancing. If not...it works anyway, hehe.)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "a braille catastrophy" by Cassandra
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