jack.hammered [dys]topia
By Cassandra
acknowledgement of insecurities tied to empty wishes and
blank hopes
are invented for the sole purpose of interior destruction rather than design
eternal phobias are locked away in oblivious zones - blackened glances
and poisoned lips
shards of frictional mirrors conflicting scarlet against obsidian in the
gaze of death
havoc spat in vodka from jackhammered sockets now carved
[lets play cage the bird all over again]
entwining porcelain fingers with sweat veiled mood rings and pinky promises
miserable and overwhelmed with a lustful shadow of vengeful tequilla sunsets
kissing a horizon of forest fire and vanilla mosquitoes to enhance unseen
beauty
until everything you once found cherished as a stunning or gorgeous possession
conflicted with an oceanic brutality unnoticed: salted pavement
[flutter, flutter, flutter, .c.r.a.s.h.]
magnified regrets stripped of cause {black} and effect {white} depart leaving
behind
a dystopia recycled into a cesspool of candy lies and tagged bungee cords
washed into a monochrome abyss with nature's bitter glory chipping taste
buds
carressing a tongue sliced into sixths and nurturing white polaroids simultaneously
manipulating the self-made hypocrites of modern standards until they are
shackled with tears
[s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k]
[c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h]
[s t u c k, c.r.a.s.h, s t u c k]
---x---x----x----x-----x-----x------x------
and you [DIE] again.
.for
..the
...thousandth
....time.
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Comments on "jack.hammered [dys]topia"
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A former member wrote:
the slithering stutter within this..the stop.st.ill words and power.lines......aesthetics alone this is so wonder.full. must endeavour to read more of your work.
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On Wednesday, May 23, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i am so happy i came across this..... why did you stop posting? we need more writes like this.
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On Wednesday, October 25, 2006, verablue
(106) wrote:
your word choice in impeccable! a brilliant read!
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On Saturday, April 1, 2006, Equinox Asylum
(140) wrote:
One word...prodigy.
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A former member wrote:
i really like your style..it's very intelligent with unique and lovely wordings. "lustful shadow of vengeful tequilla sunsets" i loved the images i got in this poem..just wonderful.
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On Sunday, March 26, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
beautiful write .. made my heart beat quicken ~V