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  • "mymy, morbid are we? but if i did that..all the guts n stuff would mess the paint on my walls up. and i just redid them to cover the stains. maybe next time!"
    Posted by Muse on "Feel My Love" by Muse
  • "Clever Muse. Keep searching the dark corners of your soul. No matter what shade of gray you may find. I enjoy the read."
    Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Feel My Love" by Muse
  • "Damn right's...Grab the squirming worm and pull him out of your brain, and crush him.:) sorry couldnt' resist now onto the poem..That was painful to read but nicely exsposed and made my feel all tingly inside because I know this feeling too well..Damn him"
    Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Feel My Love" by Muse
  • "Intense Muse, I love the way you split it out at the end so we can feel your torment(?).dragged out decadence of cold lovers lascivious shame!"
    Posted by Shadow Rapture on "Feel My Love" by Muse
  • ""Rusty stains of dried blood decorate the walls every night" - this line was a phenomenal way to end it. "A mind that’s nothing anymore" made me feel empty inside as well. Nice write, Muse."
    Posted by Christopher7xii on "Look At What You've Broken, My Love" by Muse
  • "**Emerald, depthless eyes no longer sparkle for you /They simply observe /Glazed over in the mindless serenity of the madness you inflicted** these lines. . .they fit so well. . .wonderful "
    Posted by Jaded Ireland on "Look At What You've Broken, My Love" by Muse
  • ""Making a desperate effort to soothe the pain/Of a wound that will never truly heal" Much like love's tears try in vain to heal our hearts when broken. Wonderful message. *Evangel*"
    Posted by Unknown on "(Inanimate) Lessons of Life" by Muse
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