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- "Very... busy. Busy good, I mean; within the few terse lines you say so much. The scholar in me says that the "their" in the first line should be "there"; yet you could mean the subject is baring the surrounding people's joy. So if thats what you meant I'm sorry. Regardless, brilliant piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by unknown_bitch_2003
- "I love you're use of terms from adolescence. And your flow. I'm sorry for your dealings. But you, my friend are a fantastic author. Write on and become who you want to live to be.
-The Creotion"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by unknown_bitch_2003
- "i understand exactally where you're coming from... this may sound bitchy of me, but the way i would get over something like this is to keep telling myself i'm better then them, and i deserve so much better... just trying to help, anyways hun, good write"
Posted by Jenni on "I broke my own heart" by unknown_bitch_2003
- "cutting poems dont normally do it for me but something about this one very fragile like a falling petal to the ground its like a flower you cant save but you want to and you try despite the futile reasons behind life, oh mna its sad but heartfelt I hope s"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Razor-Blade GoOd-Byes" by unknown_bitch_2003
