Broken Promise

By unknown_bitch_2003

You walked out the door
like you have done many time before
But something diffrent i can fell it

my heart breaks
into thousands of pieces

my mind tells me not to weap
thats you will come back before the week
but my heart tells me diffrent

though i try to control my tears
they start to pour

how i would love to not feel like this

so broken
so torn

there is a way to end the pain
forget about the past

Forget about the 4 years
that has gone to waste.

you are gone forever
Never coming back

i want to just forget the past
ah atlast i see that shinney devil

and run it across my wrist

wow.. that feels so much bettter
foregettin the past i mean

now i'll do it once agian

cause I no you arent coming back

slice threw my skin once agian

I might have promised you
that i wouldnt do this agian

but you walked out that door
like you have done before

but the diffrence is
you aren't coming back agian

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© 2008 unknown_bitch_2003
Published on Wednesday, June 18, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I promised my boyfriend that i wouldnt cut when we broke up i had a thousand new scars

  • A former member wrote: so sad, I second afters notion, very good write as well

  • A former member wrote: A harsh reality for many... for your sake I hope it's not a reality of yours, well written.

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