Comments by All Members
- "I like the imple flow of it...Im not really sure of exaclt what its about and the image it creates in my head is of twisted body parts and shadows...so yes...it is interesting as they said before...but it has a unique quality"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Exquisite Corpse" by Echo
- "now i have the nirvana song "negitive creep" stuck in my head. this was pleasurably simple, and beautiful. im with blueskies"
Posted by Rone4611 on "negative space" by Echo
- "as someone who lost someone once who meant a great deal to me this struck a blow right to my heart, the ache was so tangible and well written ~kristy ps this kinda left me with a romeo and juliet feel"
Posted by Sin on "Wilting Roses" by Echo
- "hmm. interesting.. not sure if i get the message, but it did read well.. minimalism is under-rated. keep at it. ~b"
Posted by blue on "negative space" by Echo
- "nice... I know this is a contradiction, but the only way I can describe it is "vividly vague"."
Posted by Unknown on "negative space" by Echo
- "something about the last line made me want more, but it was a good poem...i think shortness can be greatness if done just right."
Posted by Unknown on "negative space" by Echo
- "Thats so short, but sweet.
Sometime the greatest pleasures in life are not even four lines long. :)
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Posted by Err0r on "negative space" by Echo
- "an ache of sorrow pierces my heart...
most exquisitely written. I wish I could still write like that. "
Posted by Unknown on "Wilting Roses" by Echo
- ""Night sings/the songs/I'll never/get to sing/to you." *Smiles briefly* This reminds me so of the Phantom of the Opera...don't know why...just does. Beautiful write...I cherished every lovely word. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Music of the Night" by Echo
- "very.. very sad write but i did like it..Life with the loss of all love is tragic. i really liked that line
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Posted by Unknown on "Wilting Roses" by Echo
