Comments by All Members
- "Aww this just hurt me so badly, sorry that you had to feel this pain. It had a good tune to it, it was full of sorrow and it nipped into your soul... ~nightly"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Make Believe Love" by Lisa Vicious
- "So let me get this right you sacrifice a good thing while its not to good to save your self from the really really bad stuff that might happen? sort of sad but i know where your coming from.
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Posted by Unknown on "Mass Suicide" by Lisa Vicious
- "So let me get this right you sacrifice a good thing while its not to good to save your self from the really really bad stuff that might happen? sort of sad but i know where your coming from."
Posted by Unknown on "Make Believe Love" by Lisa Vicious
- "Wow. Insanely passionate. I don't think there is much else to say. It does a magnifencent job of knocking the reader to the floor in no time at all.
I love the imagery of a pickled heart, and i think it does wonders to express the loneliness--no that's"
Posted by Unknown on "Make Believe Love" by Lisa Vicious
- ""I gave you my heart, you kept it in a jar -
pickled with my tears like Chicago rain" I loved this piece. I related in a lot of ways. It was simple but sincere and powerful. Good job. I like your style. -Glass
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Posted by glasshouse on "Make Believe Love" by Lisa Vicious
- "Damn. This is painful to the extreme. It's sad how people can diminish another in some fucked up attempt at righteousness.. and how easy they deny the pain of someone elses suffering.. all in the name of (god?) Thanks for sharing. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Untitled 008" by Lisa Vicious
- "Nice.. this was punctuated with some great lines bleeding the truthful emotion to the surface. I loved the ending line. Welcome to DP ~b"
Posted by blue on "Rid of You" by Lisa Vicious
- "wow. this was awesome. seriously, im glad i came back to read this. you wrote this with great detail and it kept me reading. so great job."
Posted by AHHH on "Untitled 008" by Lisa Vicious
