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Make Believe Love
By Lisa Vicious
Integrity, intangible, a miracle….
Letters written but never sent for blue eyes only to read what I really
meant,
in between the lines, the lies, and the pain
lived a girl who loved you ,
A girl hell bent on being a woman.
All the pills and the booze and the choices made wrong,
the trauma, the stomach pumping, the flow -
of falling in love with falling in love,
is getting old.
I gave you my heart, you kept it in a jar -
pickled with my tears like Chicago rain,
do you remember that night we met?
You sucker-kissed me and the room began to spin,
I’d give a lifetime of truth for you to pretend you love me again.
There are days I wish we never met.
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© 2005 Lisa Vicious
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564)
wrote:
Aww this just hurt me so badly, sorry that you had to feel this pain. It had a good tune to it, it was full of sorrow and it nipped into your soul... ~nightly
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A former member wrote:
wrong comment srry|
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A former member wrote:
So let me get this right you sacrifice a good thing while its not to good to save your self from the really really bad stuff that might happen? sort of sad but i know where your coming from.
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A former member wrote:
*contd*
the wrong word.
That your tears should serve as the preservative in that jar is a wonderful irony.
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, Lisa Vicious
(6) wrote:
Thank you.... I have to say the more I read it the more I like it as well, finally something so personal I can deal with.
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Insanely passionate. I don't think there is much else to say. It does a magnifencent job of knocking the reader to the floor in no time at all.
I love the imagery of a pickled heart, and i think it does wonders to express the loneliness--no that's
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
"I gave you my heart, you kept it in a jar - pickled with my tears like Chicago rain" I loved this piece. I related in a lot of ways. It was simple but sincere and powerful. Good job. I like your style. -Glass
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On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, Lisa Vicious
(6) wrote:
Thank you.
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