Comments by All Members
- "So how they behave...hmm I think some intimidate and never get recourse, some tick off others enough, something might happen. Attainment can mean many things ...sometimes we get what we think we want."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Layer 01 Journal Karma Or Fate?" by Err0r
- "I dunno, best guess is some make it and some don't...some can have all the cards stacked in their favor and fuck it up, others been kicked to the ground and burnt to rise like a phoenix."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Layer 01 Journal Karma Or Fate?" by Err0r
- ""and the only thing i've ever stolen
was your ex's heart." =) you're the first person to make me smile today."
Posted by dying angel on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "Creative. I like how this DOESN'T fit into the mold of "How to Mkae Dark Poetry 101" I appreciate the uniqueness. ....-Samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "That last line was amazing, it was a perfect way to end. Bitches cash and connections, nice one =]. This piece is very heartfelt. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "As a math student, erasers are well praised and you can be very screwed without them. I agree, it is better to live without regrets and 'do overs'. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
- "Sheesh! Love it love it love it! That's all I can say, lol...I LOVE the last line...excellent, like a prick to the heart of whomever this was written for. Love it. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "The brash edge of a persona/emotion/mindset; a coarse slap to the senses but yet well-worded and constructed. Kudos."
Posted by Guillotine on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "This is very beautiful. I can see and feel it in my heart as I read thru the words. Its so hard to put yourself out there...thanks for the welcome. I look forward to reading more and becoming apart of dp!"
Posted by Unknown on "Patience- A Virtue Unwanted" by Err0r
- "omg. i seriously love this. it's very creative and the idea is amazing. that last line is still ringing in my ears."
Posted by dying angel on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
- "i think these are questions we'll all ask ourselves over and over, even when we think we may have the answer down pat... it's a forever contemplation and maybe along the way we'll at least have a pretty good idea..."
Posted by NikesRain on "Layer 01 Journal Karma Or Fate?" by Err0r
- "Thats a lot better and less painful than the lava soap my mom used to use when trying to erase my naughty words from mouth. Clever."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
- "i write with a pen, and put one line through the mistakes. like i said, i really love the idea. "
Posted by Unknown on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
- "very allegorical.. i often wonder if i could take all the things OUT of my artgum eraser and somehow blend them all together. ..it would be a masterpiece in itself; sometimes mistakes are my best work, and i jack the ripper them too easily. .."
Posted by Unknown on "Pink Pearl Eraser" by Err0r
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