Comments by All Members
- "i agree that the ending spoiled it alot...and maybe the subject too...if that had the flow but witha a different subject and a better ending then it would be great!!"
Posted by Unknown on "dear ____ , fuck me?" by precarious pixie
- "i didnt like the ending. it feels like you are contridicting the meaning of the poem. if your a sex addict, you need not proof for friends. maybe revise the last 3 lines? i loved the flow of the poem. your word choice was pretty good. "
Posted by spaniellie on "dear ____ , fuck me?" by precarious pixie
- "*smiles* awwwww...so very intoxicatingly sweet and hopeful. This brought back to me the feelings of longing only to be loved by the one who once was my world...thank you for reminding me of memories past. This is lovely. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Do Not Let Me" by precarious pixie
- "this very well written and very appropriately describes smoking dope. i love the lines you've put together. this poem was constructed so well. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "smoke intoxication" by precarious pixie
- "the ryhme scheme and flow is so perfect. this was witty, especially the way you sumed it up in the last stanza. .....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "safety pins" by precarious pixie
- "i bet theres someone out there who was very flattered when they read this. it was absolutly adorable. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "first love" by precarious pixie
- "i really enjoyed this one. very interesting and captivating. you had some great lines in here and good imagery. kepp writing works like this. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "insomnia" by precarious pixie
- "this was a decent description of what insomnia is... what i would have liked was to read some of the thoughts you dismiss as "mindless babble"... a string of unconnected thought-trains can be an interesting journey for writer and reader alike"
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "insomnia" by precarious pixie
- "nice... an apt description of the trippyhippy family of dope fiends intent on erasing all semblence of rational thought in deference to the worship of ecstatic realities born and destroyed in a continuum of seconds that stretch for hours"
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "smoke intoxication" by precarious pixie
