dear ____ , fuck me?

By precarious pixie



Kiss me hard
Strip me down
On the bed
Or on the ground
Bite me, suck me, like me there
Oops there goes my underwear!
Rub me down until I moan
Don’t you wish that we were stoned?!
Laugh it up baby
I’m gunna make you scream
Now we got it
Our bodies making steam
Lick me right here
Then blow on it to start the fire
Come sugar lets take it higher
Suck on my neck until I shout
Come on baby make me freak the fuck out
Push and pull
Bump and grind
Let me show you that you are mine
Drag my nails all down your back
Come on honey and fight me back
Bite my lip and make me bleed
Please bruise me now
I’m on my knees
Give me marks to show all my friends
And once they fade away…
Lets do it again!!

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
© 2005 precarious pixie
Published on Friday, December 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "dear ____ , fuck me?"

Log in to post comments.
  • Mari On Friday, December 14, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    people will always comment on sex poems. always.

  • A former member wrote: i agree that the ending spoiled it alot...and maybe the subject too...if that had the flow but witha a different subject and a better ending then it would be great!!

  • spaniellie On Friday, December 30, 2005, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    i didnt like the ending. it feels like you are contridicting the meaning of the poem. if your a sex addict, you need not proof for friends. maybe revise the last 3 lines? i loved the flow of the poem. your word choice was pretty good.

  • A former member wrote: Usually us real sex addicts say, let's not do it again. We have issues and it's these issues we wish we did not have. Bleh.

Contribution Level

Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.